Learning plan writing task

"Ohh stop it,"I said.
"Why did you steal it,”yelled the lady.
"It’s for my mum."
"Hey stop it," said the man. "How much
is the painkillers? Here take it." The man gave
me vegie soup. I looked up and ran away. 30 years later I was in working for the hospital when I saw him in a bed than  I heard there bill was 795, 00000$ but than I changed it because of what he did. It was paid 30 years ago with painkillers and a packet of vedgie soup and my dream came true because of you thancks for what you did for me
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Teacher Feedback:  You have got the idea of the story.  
The task asks you to tell the story as if you are the daughter or the boy.  
We will talk about this on Monday.

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